You tore apart my devils

A love poem, but not so cliche.

You came into my life and you terrified me,
you made me feel special like no one else did
so i sent you running for the hills
i was scared so i built wall upon wall
Each time you knocking down more and more.
Each time i let you see a little more of my core,
i let you see where my devil lay
and for a short time where he slept
unawakened, undisturbed letting me sleep at night
instead of pleading at the curve,
Every heart beat was a heart ache,
every so called blessing was a just another thing
that would go around messing.
You took me out of my shell,
you showed me that there is more to life than
obtaining the most brain cells.
You showed me the pathway to happiness,
it spiked my stress, yes but in the end
it was more than just something to impress.
You tore apart my devils,
as the flowers bloomed in every inch of my once
twisted apart brain.
You put to sleep my demons as every inch of them
was now tame. 

Author's Note

Ignore grammatical errors please, this poem is better when spoken i believe as it is meant to be fast.

Reviews

[Jeccka]

I thought it was well constructed. My only critique is that you capitalize "I" when you use it alone and capitalize the first letter of each line, you have some capitalized but not all and it adds to the work to keep it consistent. I thought it was good!

[girlwithadream]

Thank you Jeccka, means a lot that you think that and will take note of that, thanks!