Life Convenes

An entry for a 10 words I give contest -- rhymed in the order they were given.

So nonchalant,

my puzzled fae,

You pinch my heart,

no minor way,

 

With reckless eyes,

Perfume so sweet,

And tasty lips,

Eminent heat,

 

We watch it rain,

Two scrawny teens,

Absorbed in love,

Our life convenes

Author's Note

photo from pexels photos.

Reviews

[mattavelli]

Hello, Eddie, nice work here. This looks like a tough challenge. Good luck in the contest!

[Eddie Davis]

Thank you.

[Wicahpi]

Hi Eddie Davis, thank you for entering the 10 Words I Give contest!
This is a wonderful poem with sweet verse and valid rhyme. Nothing
forced; flows incredibly well. I enjoyed it very much.
Good Luck!

[Eddie Davis]

Thank you.

[Gray]

You show quite a lot of skill in this. You bring the two to life. Nice way to write.

[Eddie Davis]

Thank you for your kind words.

[Gray]

Welcome Sir.

[Dhaye]

Wow! This is excellent, Eddie. Short but you used the words well.
Nice subject, too. It's cute to see two teens like that.
Your entry is better than mine. Good luck in the contest.

[Eddie Davis]

Thanks, Dhaye, I think your story is more intriguing as it draws you in and makes you want more.