Epic Fail

Crafted during one of my dark moods. A Senryu

I used to have dreams,

Success, fatherhood, respect,

Now I await death

Reviews

[Blue]

This is a dark piece, Eddie. It's like a sword has stabbed my heart. So much grief is expressed. So much hopelessness. I imagined myself in the shoes of the speaker and I felt like breaking down. Life wasted. Dreams unachieved. What could be worse than this? Sorry to know you're undergoing this phase, Eddie. I used to be trapped in that darkness, too. But I chose to rise above life's disappointments and resolve to make the rest of my life better. It's hard. But not impossible. May God grant you strength to surpass trials.

[Eddie Davis]

Thank you, Blue, I'm not always depressed, it comes and goes, but I appreciate your kind words, I'm probably just having a mid-life crisis.

[Blue]

Can I skip that crisis? :)

[Eddie Davis]

You have many, many years to go before facing that, dear girl, so relax and enjoy your youth.

[Blue]

Yeah, I'm dealing with identity crisis right now. :P

[Eddie Davis]

It's normal too, a wonderfully talented young woman like you will find herself and will do fine.