Undead

A Senryu

My past kills my hope,

Yesterday lives forever,

Tomorrow fades away

Reviews

[Ina]

I love this. You're very talented at taking the most minimum of words yet still getting a powerful message across. I can definitely relate to the first line.

[Eddie Davis]

Thank you Ina, I tend to have dark periods and this poem flowed out of it.

[Blue]

Past, yesterday, tomorrow... You penned this brilliantly and the word play is wonderful. I can't wait to read more of your senryus.

My favorite of yours! :) Very clever.

[Eddie Davis]

Thanks, I always look forward to your reviews and comments.