I'm Nobody

I'm Nobody

A Poem by Eddie Davis
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The dark side of depression

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I’m nobody,

Worthless,

Nothing,

A face in the crowd,

 

Full of lost dreams,

Broken,

Lifeless,

A mule in the field,

 

I’ve no life left,

Downcast,

Trembling,

Facing each day alone,

 

Lacking any skills,

Shameful,

Ignored,

Just waiting to die,

 

A ragged heart,

A sunburned soul,

A drowning mind,

And withered flesh,

 

Nobody knows,

Nobody cares,

Nobody sees,

I’m nobody

© 2014 Eddie Davis


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Light always emanates from darkness, I see your light in this poem dear friend!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eddie Davis

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
This is really touching. The quatrains really brought out the emotion in the poem. Very nice job :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eddie Davis

10 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate your comments
This what has come to my mind upon reading your poem, Eddie. Everyone is a NOBODY....NOTHING....How and why? I remember my Religion Teacher in high school saying this:

This is the meaning of being a CHRISTIAN:
(Without) CHRIST IAN (I Am Nothing)

Every negative emotion that we have is normal...but it is a product of our own negative thought. This negative side of us can draw us to temptation...or will lead us to have such feelings of emptiness...that's why sometimes we feel we are nobody..or nothing.

Eddie, I'm telling these all like what have come out from my mind as I remember those high school lessons. It doesn't mean I relate it to you personally. Because like you...I am always such kind of person who lacks confidence...fearful...full of doubts...weak. I also feel I am nothing...I am a nobody.So I can fully relate to you in this piece.

Keep going.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eddie Davis

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Dhaye, I tend to go through very dark days -- usually at work-- but usually they pass. .. read more
Dhaye

10 Years Ago

You're welcome.
This is the best poem of yours I've read so far, Eddie. Full of emotions. Written from the heart, I'm sure. I can relate because I often "visit" that "darkness". It has been my home and well, it always welcomes me back like its precious child. I'm sorry to know that you have to get through this, and other people as well but I think it serves its purpose.

I adore this poem. But I hope you'll see the sunshine soon. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eddie Davis

10 Years Ago

Thanks, I've had a version of this 'poem' in my mind all last week.
Blue

10 Years Ago

My, I looked at your blogs to see if you have posted anything that might give me a clue as to why y.. read more
Eddie Davis

10 Years Ago

Thank you. Blue (sorry, I just think of you as 'Blue", I hope you don't mind). You deserve to be l.. read more

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Added on February 17, 2014
Last Updated on February 17, 2014
Tags: Depression, worthlessness, loneliness

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Eddie Davis
Eddie Davis

Springfield, MO



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