Want

When someone puts you through so much pain it's hard not to wish it on them.

I want your heart to break in pieces.
I want your chest to tighten beyond breathing.
I want your soul to feel utter darkness.
I want you to be unconsoled.
I want your smile to not exist.
I want to take away any bliss.
I want your tears to forever flow.
I want you to feel my pain forevermore. 

Reviews

[mischeif]

Very powerful emotions are beening show through this piece of writing. Short and sweet, I like how you've started every line. Very enjoyable poem.

[deeps]

So heartfelt and well stated!

[Inertia]

Simple, but effective. Very much like the emotion of bitter anger itself. You've managed to gather up all the broken pieces of a shattered relationship and melt them into one fluid description of how awful it can be and how hateful it can leave you. Definitely easy to relate to.