Fear's Control

Seems our greatest enemy is ourselves when we let fear control us.

Dreams of a voice being heard are slowly fading.

Wishes of fulfillment are slowly ceasing.

My world is sinking deeper into darkness

For my heart’s longing might die without its realization.

 

Emotions are being suppressed.

Freedom of thought and speech might never occur.

The lights may never shine on me.

Into the shadows my echo will sound.

 

Fear has gripped me.

Shyness has crippled me.

With great dread I feel my wanted future has loosed me.

 

Sadness slowly creeps in.

Reality knocks on my door and says,

“It’s all your fault that you are failing.

Your future shall soon be dead, because you did nothing to secure it.

Your future shall soon be dead, for you let fear control you”. 

 

Reviews

[Calissa Knox]

I really relate to this. This is a wonderful expression of deep emotion. I love your first line, "Dreams of a voice being heard are slowly fading." I truly understand that feeling, like losing sight of reality. This is a marvelous piece of writing. Thank you for sharing it!

[mischeif]

It reminds me of when I have to do a speech.
Very emotion piece of writing, I really enjoyed the lines
"Fear has gripped me
Shyness crippled me"

Beautiful read

[Encore]

You captured the emotion very well.
I can feel the fear as I'm reading this!
A great piece from a talented writer.

Thank you for the review as well :)

[deeps]

Sadness slowly creeps in.
Reality knocks on my door and says,
“It’s all your fault that you are failing.
Your future shall soon be dead, because you did nothing to secure it.
Your future shall soon be dead, for you let fear control you”.

Loved these lines, this is amazing here.
You are talented. I like this write alot.