Crazy Romantic

How many times will I have to put my heart on the line to learn that you don't love me. 

I made a complete fool of myself just to know your name, and the sad thing is, I would do it again. 

I would make a fool of myself in front of every single person on this planet just to get to know you. 

Some would say I'm crazy, others would call me a romantic, both groups of people would be right.

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

There's deep emotion in this piece. After some revising this could be a very touching poem. Make a line out of each phrase, try to play with the words to make it sound rhythmic. Maybe take out the curse word but that's not completely necessary depending on where it falls in the rewrite. Thank you for sharing and please return the favor by reviewing one of my pieces.