I had a dream

Morning coffee

Bacon sandwiches

I had a dream

You were back again

Author's Note

Wrote this thinking about my best friend who died, just recently.

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

My condolances, sir

[Wretched Knight]

short and sweet and very profound.

[Nobody.]

Little poem.....HUGE thought.

The mundane breakfast of the first two...
the mad internal pain of the last two...
brilliant.

[Marie]

Nice flow; nicely set up. Very simple; not too emotional...thinking of your friend.

[BikerAngie]

So few words yet so much said!

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

I want a woman to smile over breakfast with, *tears*!

[Priscilla Sayers]

How could this piece have so many views, and no one said anything?!
Well, I think the pain is intense in four lines. I feel that punch to your stomach when you wake up. Powerful poem!