Jodie's Song

More song lyrics. Wrote this after watching Contact for the tenth time. Believe it or not.

Driven to madness

Highly inspirational

Succumb to the voices

Screaming in my head

Again

 

You should be dead, and

Your traumatized wounds

They lead me astray, and

Straight to the spoon

 

Heat up the spoons

It’s all okay

Mesmerized by

Reflections I see

It’s not me

It’s not who I see

I’m not myself

Just want to be free

 

With

Infections leaking

From

Traumatized wounds

Life is leaving

Nothing you can do

 

Heat up the spoons

It’s all okay

Mesmerized by

Reflections I see.

I’m okay to go

... Okay to go

... Okay to go

I’m okay to go

 

The destinations I see

The trains that have left

The sensations I’ve felt

What’s left for me?

 

As the wound begins to bleed

As the infection begins to seethe

I heat up the spoons

Cauterize the wounds

 

Heat up the spoons

It’s okay

Mesmerized by

Reflections I see

It’s not me

That I see

It’s not me

Set me free

 

I’m okay to go

... Okay to go

... Okay to go

I’m okay to go

Author's Note

Yeah, this is a song. I might record it one day. If you like it and you are part of this site can you leave me a review even if it only consists of one word. It would help me decide if I should rewrite. And if you are from outside this site you know how to contact me. Tanx.

Reviews

[Summer D.]

Title caught my eye because I know someone with the name. The song wasn't exactly what I was expecting but I wasn't really let down either. You do a splendid job of conveying emotions. Not a wimp by any means... the imagery is pretty detailed. I don't think I would have it that graphic... but that's just me. Like the repetition in the ending.

Sounds like it'd be brilliant as a song.
Favorite Part:

"Mesmerized by

Reflections I see

It’s not me

It’s not who I see

I’m not myself

Just want to be free."

Definitely go for it.

YT,

Summer

*90*

[BikerAngie]

oh it is a good write just bad vibes for me personally.

[BikerAngie]

this one had to much punch reminded me of when my ex was slamming horse.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I adore your use of worded finality, well done, good read.

[newyearnorma]

Very powerful, the emotion really comes out in this piece