Alice In Rot

Alice In Rot

A Poem by eatmills
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This is a song I wrote

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I’ve lost my way again...


Painted perfect pictures

With your false pain.


Today is tomorrow’s future...


I’ll play your game...

It’s your future.


It’s all the same...

You’ll be the loser.


Everything is found!

Everyone is lost!


Deal me in!

Deal me out!!

Lift me up and

Shove me down!

Spread me out!

Lost and found!


I played my game...

Based on the lies.

That… were… your… fact…


You...

Dressed me up!

Dressed me down!

It was all a f*****g act!


I’ve lost my way again...

I’ve found my pain again...


Deal me in!

Deal me out!

Found my grave!

F**k I pray!


You let me know...

When you begin again...


I’ve seen your act before...

I’m already at the end...

Already fucked your w***e...


I’ve lost my way again...

Painted perfect pictures

With your false hope again.


Today is tomorrow’s future...


Lost the game

It’s all the f*****g same…

© 2012 eatmills


Author's Note

eatmills
This is actually a song I wrote for a band I was in that never made it past the whole idea thing. I might have the recording somewhere. Kinda gotta think Old Alice In Chains

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Today is tomorrow's future, I loved that line. Great piece

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. I really like this. I love the flow and the format. great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To be honest, i was drawn into your poem because of the title, good title btw. I found myself stumbling through your poem, i couldn't quite catch the flow. Love the idea of it though :)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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eatmills

mississauga, ontaio, Canada



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What do you want to know? I listen to surf, punk, metal, pop, techno, actually all music. Favourite Writers - William S Burroughs, Philip K Dick, Raymond Chandler, Stephen King, Edgar Allen Poe.. more..

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A Poem by eatmills