Smash

Smash

A Poem by eatmills
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Lost the recording of this during the great crash of 2008.

"

She calls out to me, through darkest fields.

I can see what is revealed to me.

Shadows form around me.

 

I would smash this world

Just to hear your words

Formed on false lips

So perfect I could kiss

 

Cut myself today

Just to hear you say

That I’m OK

We’ll find a way

A better way

To make our escape

Into the landscape

Of our mind

 

The dreams of blue skies and green grass growing

The scream of black lies and red blood flowing

 

I would smash this world

Just to hear your words

Formed on false lips

So perfect I could kiss

 

She calls out to me, through darkest fields.

I can see what is revealed to me.

Shadows form around me.

 

The dreams of blue skies and green grass growing

The scream of black lies and red blood flowing

 

Formed on false lips, so perfect I could kiss

© 2011 eatmills


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Very well written.
I love how you say "Of our mind"
Instead "Of my mind" Or something like that. It makes it seem so much deeper.




Posted 12 Years Ago


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eatmills
eatmills

mississauga, ontaio, Canada



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What do you want to know? I listen to surf, punk, metal, pop, techno, actually all music. Favourite Writers - William S Burroughs, Philip K Dick, Raymond Chandler, Stephen King, Edgar Allen Poe.. more..

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A Poem by eatmills