We Fought

A Poem by Janyce Helen Van Es

We Fought

I used my knife

To cut, stab, slice and gouge

He grabbed his chest and cried out,

"Help Me!"

© 2008 Janyce Helen Van Es

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Serendipity

Nice.

Sorry, there is no one to help you, deal with it.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Albert Freeman

lmao. I love your writing style. Short and to the point. I want to learn how to say so much while using so little. You painted a scene and image there that would take me several paragraphs to do. Perfect!

Posted 16 Years Ago

Jacqueline

Ooh! The violence hits quick and kind of stuns the senses. You have a knack of telling a story with few words; I guess it's safe to say that you won that fight! ;-)

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on February 24, 2008

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Janyce Helen Van Es

Pottsboro, TX

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I am just a hippie from the sixties: I Love to sketch, decorate and write. Gardening is my second delight My husband is lazy, and because we're both crazy, writers groups keep us out of a fight! It's.. more..