Strike when ready

Strike when ready

A Poem by Sincerely mine. Finally.

her gold dress shines beauty

wrapped like a caccoon

balance is a minor set back

as i try to cross the room

 

one more drink i think should do

 

i would be her protector

if i wasnt to drunk to stand

i would love and cherish her

but im to busy looking at her breasts

 

f**k....my....life...

im a monster

and she's stunning

and im stunned

 

where is my wingman?

he's just as drunk as i am

where is my game-plan?

it left the party early with "judgement"

 

i turn my back

as she exit's the room

so i pull up a stool

at the lonesome saloon

 

eight more drinks and im through

© 2008 Sincerely mine. Finally.


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this seemed to me a statement of self-worth (or lack thereof)...i greatly enjoyed it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Been there and done that, a hard lesson to learn but well worth it in the long run. Nice write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I really enjoyed the imagery you use through out this.
My favorite part though has to be
"f**k....my....life...
im a monster
and she's stunning
and im stunned

where is my wingman?
he's just as drunk as i am
where is my game-plan?
it left the party early with "judgment" "

Great read.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Sincerely mine. Finally.
Sincerely mine. Finally.

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