In the valley of liquor and rum

I saw the sky split in two

But I was to damn drunk from the party you threw

I went out every Friday night

And would run through the fields till the sun broke light

 

You saved me from a sinking ship

But I ran my mouth and shot from the hip

 

The things I do with my time

 

Oh how I wonder each and every night

When I go back to bed and turn off my light

And darkness encompasses

But I close my eyes and your all that I see

 

The choices ive made

Have led me astray

And the paths I took

Now fade in the gray

 

Im just a god in the eyes of insects

 

Reviews

[Bertie]

Amazing last line.. seriously, wow

[kaycee]

the first two lines and the final line were my favorites. i share a lot of the sentiment in this...reminds me of how the stupid s**t i do, the god i've made myself into, distracts me from what i really want. lovely poem.

[Aaron B.]

This is epic!

the last line is SO GOOD!

Im just a god in the eyes of insects

AHHHH
so good!

:)