Wait for Me...

There are times I lose my way,

Down this road of hindered sight,

And you take my hand and say,

Everything will be alright.

I may be having a s****y day,

When nothing I want is going right,

But you take my hand and say,

Everything will be alright.

Some days I pray

To see your light,

And you take my hand and say,

Everything will be alright.

You may have gone away,

But I promise never to stray.

Though we may never be husband and wife,

Please wait for me in the afterlife.

Reviews

[hanselwheresgretel?]

I love the simplicity and feel about this. How you can write out how you feel so easily is refreshing

[Jeremy V Chiew]

Thank you for the refreshing compliment.

[Bare Trees]

The last line was a little too over-dramatic for me. Good poem though.

[Jeremy V Chiew]

Thanks for taking the time to review this poem. Yes, it may seem overly dramatic, though I must clarify by saying that this piece was a dedication to a loved one who has already passed on. Thanks for the positive review, really appreciate it.

[Bare Trees]

I assumed it might be. I always think before writing. As I said, still a good poem. :) And BTW, I'm sorry for your loss. :( It is never easy to go through.

[Jeremy V Chiew]

Thanks. No worries about your comment, I do tend to get overly dramatic now and again LoL. Yes, a loss will always be felt no matter how long they say time will heal all wounds...Thanks for understanding.

[Bare Trees]

No problem.