For Her...

There's this girl I know,

She's the strongest girl I've met.

Often, she hides her pain, not letting it show

And faking a smile or two when she's actually sad.

She's been hurt and cut deep inside.

She pushed me away, thinking she can hide

Her bitter pain, her tearful sorrow;

Thinking her tear stains will fade come tomorrow.

Honestly, I know not her past

But I know her feeling.

For the memories I've hidden behind my cast

Will leave you reeling

I see the warmth she longs for,

I see the love she yearns but fears,

I see the strength she has in store,

I see it guiding her through her years.

Yet, as I say this, I can see

That she may not feel the same way about me.

Nonetheless, it is her that I adore

And I'll care for her forevermore...

Reviews

[Mizuki Yoshida]

Jeremy this truly is a beautiful poem and you are right i do hide my pain and am sorry, if you felt i pushed you away am really sorry. i really care about you Jeremy , i really do. you are the first person who ever understand me and i thank you for that

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This is sweet. From your words it is obvious you are a caring person whose light will never go out for this girl. Good poem from you.

[Jeremy V Chiew]

Thank you for taking the time to review this piece. I appreciate it and shall return the favour on your poem(s).

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You're welcome Jeremy.