Life's Nostalgia

Life's Nostalgia

A Poem by Jeremy V Chiew
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Inspired by the ending of W. Somerset Maugham's "The Lotus Eater", this is the poem of how I see it through the fictional eyes of the fictional Thomas Wilson.

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Not wanting to wake,
But still opening my eyes.
Greeting me were chirping, tweeting birds and a lake,
Greeting back were my yawns and sighs.

All around me, brown leaves are dancing
Their last waltz, tango; their last pirouette.
Alas, how cruel, fate and time are ever advancing,
Stopping abruptly when the number's up, like a game of roulette.

Now, as I look around, older and humble,
Consternation shall be mine companion and friend.
For it was this foolish boy who thought life was a rumble,
And if not for you, that would have been his thought to the very end.

Yes, you have shown me a side untold.
Who knew a love from a schoolboy could be so bold?
You took a world so blisteringly cold,
You made me happy and warm in your loving hold.

Now, I'm old and wrinkled;
Like aged paper, worn, torn and crinkled.
I look around from my old oak tree once more,
To the world I knew so well before,
Before closing my eyes forevermore...

© 2013 Jeremy V Chiew


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Jeremy V Chiew
All comments and reviews are welcomed.

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A great rhyming and fictional poem...Bravo...................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jeremy V Chiew

10 Years Ago

Thank you for sparing me your time in reviewing my poem, really appreciate it
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)......................
I am impressed by the wonderful rhymed piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jeremy V Chiew

11 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to review my writing. Really appreciate it.
zainul

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome,dear writer.:)

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Tags: The, Lotus, Eater, Death, Life, Reminiscent, Nostalgia, Pensive

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Jeremy V Chiew
Jeremy V Chiew

Johor Bahru, Johor, Malaysia



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Cynical poet who often envisions death. Oh, and hi. more..

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