I Hate You...

I Hate You...

A Poem by Jeremy V Chiew
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Love goes both ways. Words can help you get there.

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I hate you.
It cannot be said that,
My love for you is true.
And that it will last forever.
From the first day we met, I gave you my heart;
I knew right from the start.
You were the one,
Just like a vacuum.
Sucking the life out of me,
That's not how it is meant to be.
Without you,
I am happy.
I am free.

Now, read it from the bottom up.

I am free.
I am happy.
Without you,
That's not how it is meant to be.
Sucking the life out of me,
Just like a vacuum.
You were the one,
I knew right from the start.
From the first day we met, I gave you my heart;
And that it will last forever.
   My love for you is true.
 It cannot be said that, 
I hate you.

© 2013 Jeremy V Chiew


Author's Note

Jeremy V Chiew
Do pardon the somewhat nonexistent rhyme scheme. Oh, and all reviews/feedbacks are welcomed...though be gentle on me when doing so. Thanks.

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Added on February 6, 2013
Last Updated on February 6, 2013
Tags: Reversible poem, Up down, Down Up, Love, Hate

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Jeremy V Chiew
Jeremy V Chiew

Johor Bahru, Johor, Malaysia



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Cynical poet who often envisions death. Oh, and hi. more..

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