Lorien
A Book by eastallegheny
It was supposed to be a simple quest. It was supposed to be a simple "find and retrieve" mission. But nothing is ever as simple as it seems on paper, is it? The six members of the questing party will
© 2014 eastallegheny
Author's Note
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This is a first draft and most of the glaring problems (pacing, transitions etc) I'm aware of, and will fix in the editing phase. Mostly I'm looking to see what people think of the characters, the voices, and the general plot of the thing.
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