In the Comfort of Me

He is dazed and amazed

By the love that I gave

The tingle as we mingled

Defining two as a single

As he basked in the comfort of me

Thinking how could, this hurt oh so good

Not everything is meant -to be understood

Like the longing we keep

And the pleasure it seeks

He feels complete in the comfort of me

Passion so dense, yearning intense

His need for fulfillment is immense

Like love soaked in desire

He searches for that fire

That comes in the comfort of me

Oh but so, little does he know

I’m a breed that not often grows

So search as he might

But no one else fits right

For his needs are in the comfort of me

Reviews

[Potter]

This almost sounds like a true story? I like the way you express yourself as a strong, sexual, confident woman. That is very attractive.

[easha_t]

yeah i guess it is a true story, it was meant to show a strong physical and mental connection that was good and bad but the loss of it leaves him in pursuit of something he will never have again. First attempt at this topic but probably try another soon. Thanks for the review!

[Potter]

no problem at all. I will read more of your stuff.

[zainul]

Wonderful confidence plays throughout your piece.
Specially,here:
"He feels complete in the comfort of me"
I am sure you have learned the magic to captivate a man.
Fabulous write!!!
Congratulations!!!

[easha_t]

Thank you agian for the review, I just learned that i can comment here lol. I appreciate the compliments and hope to write something else you like soon.

[zainul]

I will wait eagerly for your next write.
Your poem is a spring of love.
I am going to read it again now.

[easha_t]

Aww thanks,... I have 2 other poems, not sure if they are your style because they are different than this one but who knows.

[zainul]

Well,let me read them.
Every creation is new.
Love all of them.