Worth the time

It starts with a hello
And ends with a goodbye
What's the point of it
Falling hard
It isn't what we expect
Yet it's repeated
Over
And
Over
Again.

I prefer to stay away from it
Because for once I was affected by it
And it ended with nothing
But a tragic end to it
So what's the point of it
There's no use of it
I thought I could make use it
Make sense of it
But now I've finally lost all sense of it.

So take my worthy advice
It's not worth the time
It leads to an ending
A pain you heart can't define

So I'll spend my time
Away from it
Looking for it
Is just overrated and now
I'll grow alone
Grow far apart
From the ones I love
And I'll depart all that
I won't deal with that

There is no sense to it
I'll be a little realistic
And admit to it
It won't ever last
It will always become my past
And not only that
But also

It just isn't
Worth the time.

Author's Note

= it was kind of at the moment... but I've had the feeling... : What did you think?

Reviews

[Randolf Ramos]

It starts with a hello
And ends with a goodbye
What's the point of it
Falling hard
It isn't what we expect
Yet it's repeated
Over
And
Over
Again.

I prefer to stay away from it
Because for once I was affected by it
And it ended with nothing
But a tragic end to it
So what's the point of it
There's no use of it
I thought I could make use it
Make sense of it
But now I've finally lost all sense of it.


======= Lessons are the key to better life. Perhaps pain of some sort gave you the ability to recognize it beforehand and be able to handle it easily the next time around.

[Blindsighted]

Lizzie, I seriously had no idea you wrote this well. *o* I love it. The repetition really adds to it, and the rhyming, too. Great message ((even if its sad-- BETTER if its sad)). GREAT job.

[The Morbid The Merrier]

Woah. That's a lot of it's (IN A GOOD WAY! Go repetition, woot! ;D) It was good, and strong. Very nice, Lizzie!

[Closed Account]

I like this a lot! I can definitely relate to it.
Great job!(:

[watch_the_world]

I really like this very to relate to, xD nice job xD

[Short.Nerd]

Its nice. (: Great job!