Kings & Queens

Kings & Queens

A Poem by Liz-z

I adore you, never forget that
I smile at your charming acts
Your confidence
And beauty
Has me attached

You admire me, I can't forget it
Your touch is tender and kind
You love me for who I am
You are just so divine

Our passion towards each other, indescribable
 
Kiss me delightfully
While I'll hug you tightly
Embrace me and I'll set up the night

Our connections to the rest of the world
It infuriates us
At times
It's all just a contest
And none can refuse

But have no fear
Our trust and loyalty
Will over come us
The honesty we share
Will protect us

Our emotions are a match
Boundaries are set
Together
Possessive and passionate
We make it through it all 
As
The Kings & Queens of the Jungle

© 2010 Liz-z


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Has an empowering feeling to it, especially towards the end.

"Our emotions are a match
Boundaries are set
Together
Possessive and passionate
We make it through it all
As
The Kings & Queens of the Jungle"

^^ My favourite part, especially the last line.


Posted 14 Years Ago


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"Embrace me and I'll set up the night"
For some reason that line stuck out to me and stuck with me. Very nice poem here. I agree with Crusadercross in that it sound like you're talking about one person, not two. That is very neat.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is quite a symbiotic poem. The poem speaks as if you are talking about one person not two. Very well done. The two subjects not only complement each other, they are each other. Liekd it a lot. Bravo LIz.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

impressive

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome poem...I enjoyed it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I love to write, even though I could use some more practice, constructive criticism perhaps? :) I love music, the end! THE TEN COMMANDMENTS OF GERARD WAY 1.thou shall never let.. more..

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