Loving You is Beautiful

How do you do it
I could never be mad at you
How do you do it
You put a spell on me
With you green / brown eyes
And you checks so clear
Your long opening arms
Surrounds me
With a warming hug

You make me laugh
You make me want to smile
You make me want to wake up even when it's raining

When you don't know what to do
And you're all confused
You do the best to make me love you

You're incredibly smart
And funny too
How could I ever think of losing you?

I hate it when you make me mad
Words do attack
I hate it when you act so stupid
Laughing at that
I hate it when you listen to them
When you know you shouldn’t
And I hate it when you know your wrong
But don't want to admit it

But when you hold me tight
Say you love me
And call me beautiful in your own way
It makes a difference
The way I think
It makes me love you

Reviews

[DamienHino]

"You make me laugh
You make me want to smile
You make me want to wake up even when it's raining"
Beautiful line.
"When you don't know what to do
And you're all confused
You do the best to make me love you"
I like this line alot! You have most aspects of a relationship good and bad all in this poem, good job

[Jeff]

We all have relationships like that. I think most are anyways. This is a good piece.

[Love Is Dead]

this was so beautiful...keep up the good and entertaining work! to me this was cute and its the truth about every ones lover....mostly parents though.