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The Sad Truth

The Sad Truth

A Poem by Liz-z

Who knew I'd be damned again.
Oh right I did.
Falling for the same trick over and over again.
It's a curse,
No... it's just me.
Stupid me. 
I'm leaving soon anyways.
For good.
Gone were you can't find me.
You said that you'd miss me.
And I pray you will.
You upset me. I hate you.
You make me laugh. I'm falling for you.
You hug me. I'm confused.
You tell truth. I'm trapped.
It is a love, hate relationship.
Even you said it.
And then you have me lost
In your stupid brown eyes
And wrapped up in mess.
With your stupid lame self

Stuff like "I'll wont let you go,"
Or "I'm going to keep you."
Or something stupid like "I'll bomb the airport just so you can stay with me."
Doesn't really help.
Because you go right back to her.
And then her.
I can't compete with them.
And I don't want to.

The words are true, but your actions don't show.
I love you. You know that.
& and I know you love me too
But face it. I need more than that.

I need you.
To give me some space.
Let me breathe

I need you
To give me some time
To know that you're not mine

I need you
To say goodbye
Because I'm gone.

© 2010 Liz-z


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WOW! This is great and I know exactly where you're coming from. You have a few grammer mistakes, but hey who doesn't. I love the way your words speak of love and hate coinciding with one another. Especially the last three stanzas.

"I need you
To give me some space
Let me breathe"

GENIUS! You want him, but you know you don't need him. Great Write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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so emotional. but calm.fav line:"I need you.
To give me some space.
Let me breathe

I need you
To give me some time
To know that you're not mine

I need you
To say goodbye
Because I'm gone. "

Posted 14 Years Ago


WOW! This is great and I know exactly where you're coming from. You have a few grammer mistakes, but hey who doesn't. I love the way your words speak of love and hate coinciding with one another. Especially the last three stanzas.

"I need you
To give me some space
Let me breathe"

GENIUS! You want him, but you know you don't need him. Great Write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Liz-z
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I love to write, even though I could use some more practice, constructive criticism perhaps? :) I love music, the end! THE TEN COMMANDMENTS OF GERARD WAY 1.thou shall never let.. more..

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