The Truth

My courage, or lack thereof.

I love you more now than you will probably ever know

It is springing up in my heart, bursting to be let go

Like an arrow being pulled tight on a wooden bow

But when you look at him, I see that it may never be so

You might say that it is never meant to be

I would respond with why don't we try it and see

However, I shoot myself down, I don't give myself that chance

Even though you instill in me hope with just a passing glance

When will I get the courage, when will I give chase

I want to be with you, but I'm scared that you won't feel the same

I'm not wanting a big commitment, that's just not the case

I'm being serious though, my love is not just a claim

It is the truth, and it always will be

(Sigh)

For now I'm content, It's enough to see you smile

I won't wait for long though, don't ignore me forever

You better make up your mind, I'm tired of going that extra mile

I will move on, you cannot make this decision whenever

Just know that you will always have a special place in my heart

The size depends on whether you choose to be together, or apart

Author's Note

You know the drill

Reviews

[Jason Ellis]

I agree with Sasha, the flow could be a bit better.
However, I don't think it took away from the beauty of the poem too terribly much. I can relate, as well. In fact, most people probably can. In my opinion, that's a good thing. People enjoy reading about things they have personally experienced.
You effectively captured my interest with the first poem I read. Now, I'm in love with your writings. Good job, my friend. :)

[Sasha]

Well, I can definitely relate to this. The first stanza was amazing and I loved it. The bow and arrow simile is a really good way of explaining that feeling and I was impressed with it. I see that you lost your rhythm by the second stanza and think there's a lot of fat that can be cut to make it flow better. I liked the sigh. It added a "you're not just reading a poem, I'm truly pouring my heart out here" effect.
Overall, it's really good. :)