She Makes Me Feel Like I'm Flying

Its pretty simple.

Beginning-

Coasting

Climbing

Cruising 

Freewheeling

Talking 

Holding 

Laughing

Wishing

Stalling!

Uncertainty

Suspicion

Doubt

Anger

Fear

Solitude...

Forgiving

Stabilizing

Ascending

Soaring

Loving

Living

Confessing?

Descending

Tumbling

Free-falling

Plummeting

Crashing

Burning

...

Finally, like a Phoenix out of the Ashes

I am...

Rising

Author's Note

Eh...

Reviews

[Ishgnu]

Hey Dylan I love this! It's just how it is when love tugs your heart strings, as though you can't speak nor breathe. Each word is a beat. This poem is like the "pow pow pow pow" of your heart beat trying to describe what its feeling. It portrays the dizzying heights of love and also the inevitable burn when lost, but in the end... to have known love, is to have lived, right?

[Sasha]

This is interesting. I like that you went through the motions of loving someone in such a simple but understandable way.

[Vin]

I liked the uniqueness of this piece :)
You created a great poem and showed clear emtioon by having one word to each line, truly amazing! Good job, thanks for sharing.

-Beth

[Vartul]

All understanding depends on interpretations,and the way i've interpreted this poem,i find it very subtle and melodious.Each word created an image in my mind, and the flow of the poem is lovely.
Keep Writing!

[Mason]

Interesting...I like it.