To Socialize

I have witnessed One of the greatest manifestation Of human social connection.

Social experiments, as we would call them,

Are one of the easiest ways to prove

The indestructible chain.

But more delicately proven

Is when a certain group

Unites in spirit and virtue.

Humanitarian efforts,

Environmental rallies, and

Political games.

More often than not,

These are social experiments

Meant to try and test human interactions.

To help a person in need,

To return a great favor to our origin,

And to cry out for justice

Are just few of the reasons

Why we stand and claim

That we are one and the same.

Under one heaven,

Today I’ve seen how

A minority became powerful.

Only through cooperation,

Unity, and communication

Was this made possible.

Author's Note

This was written on whim.

Do tell me what you think and point out the technical errors. :D

Reviews

[Ladie NiQue]

Very truthful.. I love the political emotions, and your word choice. Good job.

[ChristianM]

Kind of a political theme here but you do a good job making your feelings or emotions about the matter bleed through the lines.
Nice job

[Moyo]

Yes, what you've said is very true, but it didn't really sound to me like a poem. I don't know, maybe I read it wrong. It felt like it had no structure.

[Jeff Miller]

Easy to read, great topic, all adds up to make a great poem!

[Shreya]

the topic is gr8. Attractive. Nice to read poem

[MagiCrystal]

I really like the topic.. but...you try to put your mind in many things. This is like a message.. so it is not a poem to me at all !!!
.. there is not rhyme or flow.. so it is cute.. It needs more expression if you want to know..!
Lot's of typos and mistakes.. over all.. hands down.. good one

[Jooolie]

This is really good :) I personally like that you did a free verse rather than using a rhyme scheme. It gives the poem a more raw feel like you're trying to focus mainly on getting the message through rather than making the verses fit into a pattern. Keep up the good work :D

[Francez]

Interesting topic!

[Terence Foster]

lurve the theme and aagain, like the big long stanzas
nice one.
tarr for addin'

[Dev]

I liked the theme of this. I agree with it :) As for the errors I think Rachel pointed them out.. I dont have anything to say about that :)