Somebody

This is dedicated to Vicky and Marie. <33 Free verse.

I know you feel.
Like you are nothing,
Like a hallow shell,
You want someone to love you,
For who you are,
But that doesn't make you,
A nobody,
But in reality you are a somebody,
You will always be something,
People can't tell you,
That you are a nobody,
That you are a hallow shell,
They can't tell you,
That you are worthless,
You have people that will love you,
You have people that will care,
So please just remember,
You are someone,
In somebodies eyes.

You will be loved,
You don't have to feel alone,
You will be somebody,
You will make it,
You will have a life,
That everyone else would be jealous of,
Don't ever bring yourself down,
You will make it,
You will be something,
You will be somebody,
And you will be loved for it,
So please don't let people,
Tell you are a hallow shell,
Because I know it hurts,
Others know it hurts.

You will be something,
And you will be somebody,
Just keep thinking that.

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

What a beautiful message! This gives me hope! Thank you. :)

[ღ.яαg..]

Awwwwwwww! Such a sweet poem =D It's touching, and moves along really well. Good job!!!

[Mockingbird]

an excellent self-affirmation for those who feel alone and worthless. it's something to read every night for positive-reinforcement.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

It flows perfectly, well done, good read, I might suggest you keep it more raw though!

[Missy Moooooo]

Great write (:

[Becky Clancy]

Nice piece of work you have here ^^ I really liked it (:

[KillerXonXmove]

This was a great write.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Words of Love...
A True friend.

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

Danke meine liebe fruendin...

-Marie Riorden-

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Hard to think that...v.v I wanna...but...I can't........

This is a good write though, it did make me feel a lil better.