Gun to Him

Collab between me and Gus.

At one moment,
We were friends,
But the next moment,
We weren't.
What happened to change that you ask?
Well she pulled a gun on me.

I don't know what happened

I don't know what I did,

It just went by so quick.

 

We used to be good friends,
She loved me,
But for some reason she hates me now,
She cocked the gun to my head.

 

I think she might be insane,

mentally deranged and very screwed up,

but she is my friend,

so I will love her no matter what.

She loved him,
But she wanted to say goodbye,
She was about to pull the trigger.

 

And he was prepared to die.

Author's Note

Heheh

Reviews

[dreaming dame]

:) Nice! I like this. Especially the... he was ready to die. :)

[Eleanor]

Wow...I love this! Amazing job both of you
-Eleanor

[DemonicVeil]

I love this!! :D reminds me of what one of my friends did once.
***If only you knew***

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Terrific work by both of you,
Really shows how true love will still love the person,
The emotions captured real well, can feel the heart racing
Superb :D

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Sparkles in it's innocence and emption, a well thought out piece, well done, good read.

[Missy Moooooo]

Wow, nice poem. Very emotional but nice.

[Tamia123]

:D This is so good Ang! So deep and easy to relate to to! Good write doll :)

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

You let me read this last night on FB. I really do love this.
It's almost like the person is talking to someone else and then to themselves.
It's got an interesting point to it.
Congrats on this to you and Gus. It's an amazing poem.

-Marie Riorden-