Pusshu-Push

Pusshu,
Hanarete itami,
Sore wa hanarete iku yō ni,
Sore wa anata ni eikyō o ataete wa ikemasen.

Pusshu,
Kizu hanarete,
Sore wa, anata no handan o kumo

Sore wa warukunai yō ni shite kudasai.

Tada oshi tsudzuke,
Soshite, anata wa daijōbudesu.

English translation

Push,

Away the pain,

Make it go away,

Don’t let it affect you.

 

Push,

The hurt away,

It clouds your judgment,

Don’t let it get worse.

 

Just keep pushing,

And you’ll be fine.

Author's Note

I love Japanese over English. Just saying. :)

Reviews

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I love Japanese over English as well except I don't know very much. T^T but this is awesome :) me gusta!!! :DD (hehe throwing a third language in there!)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Wow....didn't know your Japanese skills...and atleast I will remember
Pusshu = push :)

The poem itself....makes perfect sense, said in just right amount of words...
what to do with hurt and pain...very poetic...great work :)

[Cassie Fraga]

wow.... this is just what I needed... thank you for sharing a creative piece!!!

[Tamia123]

One word: Wow. Your such a good writer!! I'm jelly :3

[SpaceDeflector]

I like it! I didn't know you could write in Japanese...You're an awesome writer :)

[Missy Moooooo]

I like it . :) Nice write what did you write it in English then Google Translate it?

[Canicus]

I like it, has the the feeling of hope to it
wonderful write