# 4

Never judge a book by it's cover.

My eyes are pure blue crystals,

That will stare into your soul,

Sucking information out of you,

But you will never know,

I can just stare into your eyes,

To tell what you are thinking,

You think I’m a freak,

You think I’m creepy,

But the thing is,

You don’t know the real me.

In their hides an innocent person,

That doesn’t want to look into your thoughts,

Suck up your information,

But that is what I’m forced to do,

Since I was created,

To be a spy,

For a boss that doesn’t know,

How to keep a secret either,

I know everything about him,

I do have human emotions,

Even though I’m not classified as a human,

I am a doll,

I am a creation,

I bare all your answers,

All your secrets,

And I don’t share them,

But next time just remember,

I’m just as innocent as you,

I hide behind this mask,

Because you think I’m a freak,

And you think I’m creepy.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

"their" should be there, and "bare" should be bear :) (grammar nazi :P)

But otherwards. I like it. It's got a tinge of mystery and an air of something else about it.
Suits me just well.

Good job.

-Marie-

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love the reflection and obsrvations that defines beyond first impressions just how deep and how deeply people actually think :)

[Emunah June.]

I feel a sense of heartbreak behind your words.

While I know you were writing about the picture, I can't help but feel like you're adding some of your own reality. I want you to know that I think this piece is absolutely lovely, but you shouldn't bring yourself down, okay? :-)

[Cassiopia Summers]

This is interesting. I really liked it although there were instances of repetitive remarks, and I think with a little editing this piece could be even better! :)