My Newest Wish

This is going to be written for Naomi Rose Reseder....I miss you everyday.

I wish he took me,
Instead of you.
Because you had more life,
To live than I did.
You were only fifteen,
When you lost your life.
The news of your death,
Has destroyed every single,
Part of me.
I loved you,
With my whole heart.
You were one of my best friends.
But now you are gone.
You were the one,
That made me feel better,
When I was down,
And you have helped me,
When I needed it.
You're life was cut to short,
But my newest wish,
Is for you,
To be here instead of me.
Because you deserve to be here,
More than I need to be.
I am only wishing,
It didn't come down to these circumstances.
Just know that you will always be loved,
You will never leave my heart,
And you will be in there forever,
Because you affected me,
And I will always have love for you.
My newest wish,
Is one that is still going through my mind.
I just need to remind myself,
That you are in my heart,
So I don't forget the good times we shared.
I will love and miss you.
I love you,
Naomi Rose.

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I heard about her, such a sad loss and such a great poem I'm sure she'll be so proud of.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Im sorry for your loss!
A touching letter indeed!

[Matthew Kult]

Elegantly written and truely heartfelt.

Matthew

[Tasha]

I loved this Angie. You are a really good friend, and she is lucky to have a friend like you. We never talked but I love Naomi and I miss her dearly, we all do. Her words will live on forever, but don't wish yourself away because no matter how much she told us no one really knows all that she went through. This was such a beautiful tribute to such an amazing person.

[+Naomi+]

I miss her too...
You seem like a great friend, Angie. She was lucky to have you as her friend when she could..
I loved Naomi more than I loved myself, and she knew it. She knew how much she was cuz everyone told her. Yet she ran from us..>.< I miss her so much, and she'll never know....

A great tribute to her. Beautiful words...

100/100

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this, it's a beautiful tribute to her. I don't wish you where gone though. It would have been easier if it where me. I miss her so much, it hurts knowing she's gone, and that she can't come back. I hate seeing those reveiws she left me from last week. I want us to become closer.. if you don't mind. I don't know what else to say besides...amazing.