One Way Ticket

I wish this could happen...but I know it can't..

One way ticket,

To the place I want to be,

I want to fly there,

I just can't find happiness,

Until I am in the place,

I need to be.

A place where I feel better,

A place where my thoughts,

Will not turn into what they are today.

I need a one way ticket,

To the place that I want to call home.

Please buy me that ticket,

And set me free,

Then my moods will change,

And I will finally be happy.

Be at peace.

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Such a relatable poem, love the one way ticket analogy greatly, super:)

[MAC]

great write...has a little slam feel to it giving it a nice little edge. love the flow of this...fast like thoughts.

[Kyla H]

Hum, This is very emotional and give me something to think about. Good job.

[kdpgrahi]

My dear the ticket to where you want to be earned by yourself only, nobody can buy it for you. Anyhow good portrayal

[Matthew Kult]

Honest and true. Very open.

Great write...

Matthew

But why can't it happen?