My Soul

My soul,

Is the only thing,

That is alive,

At this point,

My body is dead,

But my soul,

Is alive,

It is the one that is breathing for me,

I am not breathing on my own,

My nerves are dead,

My feelings are dead,

Though my body,

Is still alive,

It is only alive,

Because my soul,

Is what is keeping it alive.

I don’t think it will change,

Until my whole body,

Lives on my own again,

Get out of this depression,

The difficult part of my life,

I hope it changes,

But my soul,

Is alive while I’m not.

Reviews

[Escape My Fate]

Me heart hurt! This is amazing. Sad yet true. Great job

[cfix]

I can feel your emotion in this write.
I know how it feels at times.

[BLACKCRUSH]

Yes , this is depression. I once told a doctor " I'm in life but life's not in me" . You hit it on the nose with this one. Great write.

[Norma M Sutton]

I love this. It expresses the sadness so well.