Cut Open and Torn Apart

On the outside I seem okay.
On the inside it feels like I'm dead even though I'm alive.
By everyone that knows me.
Other days I feel like I am the happiest person on the planet.
I can call that a lie.

I am cut open and torn apart.
Your words can't help.
Your actions won't work.
It is all because I am cut open and torn apart.

Through all of the fake smiles.
All of the fake laughs.
I'm faking everything just to get away from you.
Not that I don't love you.
I really do it's just that I feel hurt on the inside.

I am cut open and torn apart.
Your words can't help.
Your actions won't work.
It is all because I am cut open and torn apart.

I don't know what I did.
I don't know how it happened.
The reason that I am hurt on the inside.
But I can say that I don't like it.

I am cut open and torn apart.
Your words can't help.
Your actions won't work.
It is all because I am cut open and torn apart.

Author's Note

I guess it is a song more than a poem, but oh well just tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Maria F. Rojas]

yeah, you can fool people thinking you are a happy person. Only person that knows for real is yourself and you have to deal with the feelings you have been through each day til you move on then there is nothing left to lie with yourself. Painful but not a bad song. Keep up. :)

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

This is wonderful for some reason in my head i herd it as if papa roach was singing it, maybe its the "cut open and torn apart" similarity to "I tear my heart open" idk, either way good song/poem. :D

[Ashley.M.E]

yeah I read it and it didn't sound as good as it did when I song it in my head. So I would say the same, Still the poem/song was a good read. Thanks for teh read request.