I'm Tired

This is dedicated to someone that really hurt me. And if you know me well you do know who it is.

I'm tired,
Of you pretending.
I'm tired,
Of you lying.
I'm tired,
Of you saying what you wanted to say.
I'm tired,
Of the pain you cause.
I'm tired,
Of you breaking my heart into pieces.
I'm tired,
Of all of this crap.
Jump off a bridge if you have to.
You aren't worth it anymore.
I'm tired of you hurting me.
Maybe you should get out of my life.
I wish I could slit your throat and call it even.
I'm tired of this pain.
I'm tired of this lie you keep putting me on.
Why would you do that?
To protect your own hide or mine?
I'm tired of your face.
It's ugly and disgusting to me now.
I'm tired of all of your crap.
I will throw you off the Brooklyn Bridge.
I will make you hit your face on a locker.
Or something harder to make you bleed.
This is for you little dweeb.
Now get out of my life because I'm tired of you. 

Author's Note

Dedicated to one person I trusted most. Then he had to rip my heart out of my chest. My favorite line of this is I wish I could slit your throat and call it even.

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

Wow, a really powerful write! Your emotions came through so strongly in this piece, and I really felt the anger and frustration behind your words. There was certainly a sense of pain and heartache in your poem, and I thought that you did a great job in expressing this in the beginning, particularly with the repetition of the line 'I'm tired,'. Great write!
~PaperHearts

[tynamite]

That is so true. I know someone who was like that and you make this poem come alive with the person's conflict and confusion they go through. Also with the imagery and emotion.

[Jason Ellis]

:o
Wow. This is def' my favorite of the one's I've read so far.
Whoever that is, just got OWNED. :)
Well, if you actually did all of that stuff to them, they'd get owned. Haha.
Still, my point is: This is good. Very good.
What you were feeling when you wrote this most certainly came through.
Fantastic write.

[r]

Paperhearts was right. :) This poem is very clear in the emotions, and the repetiton was AWESOME. A dark and fantastic poem. The last three lines are my favorites, i think so anyway, out of the whole poem. xD

[Ashley.M.E]

I agree with what Paperhearts said, over all I really love this poem

[Michael X]

absolutely had me from word to word, and when got to these sentences
"I wish I could slit your throat and call it even.
I'm tired of this pain.
i felt this was an amazingly spoken poem regarding the powerful meaning
that defines a broken trust in so many ways, excellent job. keep it up

[Kat Plunkett]

Im kind of going through something similiar to this but he wasnt my boyfriend and i never liked him like that. I just considered him to be a good friend but today i realized he's not exactly who i thought he was. This is a really good poem (like all of the ones you write) and full of emotion. Keep up the GREAT work :)

[SamBug]

Wow, this was very strong. The anger and repetition blended in together and the end result = amazing. You did very good.

[Dutch Jr.]

Well, I can definitely feel how you feel about this person reading this. You're quite vivid about what you would imagine doing to this person, and that, in turn, captures how bad he hurt you. Powerful words, vivid images, nice write.

[Eidolon Michael]

Wow, that was intense. I could just feel the emotions-*looks at the review below me and sees that they already said it* oh...well, I have to agree with PaperHearts that the emotions are displayed very well. Good job ^_^

[Witness 2 Humanities In..]

Loved it. Powerful poem