I'm Tired

This is dedicated to someone that really hurt me. And if you know me well you do know who it is.

I'm tired,
Of you pretending.
I'm tired,
Of you lying.
I'm tired,
Of you saying what you wanted to say.
I'm tired,
Of the pain you cause.
I'm tired,
Of you breaking my heart into pieces.
I'm tired,
Of all of this crap.
Jump off a bridge if you have to.
You aren't worth it anymore.
I'm tired of you hurting me.
Maybe you should get out of my life.
I wish I could slit your throat and call it even.
I'm tired of this pain.
I'm tired of this lie you keep putting me on.
Why would you do that?
To protect your own hide or mine?
I'm tired of your face.
It's ugly and disgusting to me now.
I'm tired of all of your crap.
I will throw you off the Brooklyn Bridge.
I will make you hit your face on a locker.
Or something harder to make you bleed.
This is for you little dweeb.
Now get out of my life because I'm tired of you. 

Author's Note

Dedicated to one person I trusted most. Then he had to rip my heart out of my chest. My favorite line of this is I wish I could slit your throat and call it even.

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

Wow, a really powerful write! Your emotions came through so strongly in this piece, and I really felt the anger and frustration behind your words. There was certainly a sense of pain and heartache in your poem, and I thought that you did a great job in expressing this in the beginning, particularly with the repetition of the line 'I'm tired,'. Great write!
~PaperHearts

[Felipe]

damm powerfull words,good poem thought

[Leanne Conway]

Damn, So powerful! I love this one!

[Liza]

unfortunately we all go through being tired of being sick and tired...you've expressed this eloquently and it is an empowering expression of taking back one's energy into themselves because one grows tired of serving another that takes and takes.

[Julijana Velichkovska]

I will throw you off the Brooklyn Bridge.
I will make you hit your face on a locker.
Or something harder to make you bleed...
the best verses in my oppinion!
the victim becomes the bully...

[FlawedByDesign]

A lot of animosity and rage in this piece. Your feelings towards this person show through; they are clear, poignant and direct. There's no denying that there is passion in this piece, but I feel like it is too much even when expressed in poetic form. Saying,
"I wish I could slit your throat and call it even"
takes it too far "in my opinion".

[revenant21]

Its a very strong piece, good job. I can feel your emotion behind it. I think the throat slitting line is my favorite too. ^.^ good job

[Emilia Kuemin]

Very strong, I can feel your emotions, and I've had a similar event happen to me. One the 6th line down I think that 'wanted' should perhaps be 'want'. Everything else is pretty much present tense.

[Kaitlyn]

A lot of raw, unchecked emotion here. I'm sorry for what he did to you and he will get what he deserves in the end. . . They always do. . . Powerful write

[Moth Phoenix]

very intense i must say kid. I love it =]

[Kanattas Atir Enomo]

this peice is raw, full of emotion and great imagery. nice repetition of the word tired. and i laughed when i read what you wanted to do to him, oh picturing it brought me joy. the only issue i had was how it started out with short lines then they got longer. maybe when you start the longer lines, you could start a new stanza? just a little suggestion