I'm Tired

This is dedicated to someone that really hurt me. And if you know me well you do know who it is.

I'm tired,
Of you pretending.
I'm tired,
Of you lying.
I'm tired,
Of you saying what you wanted to say.
I'm tired,
Of the pain you cause.
I'm tired,
Of you breaking my heart into pieces.
I'm tired,
Of all of this crap.
Jump off a bridge if you have to.
You aren't worth it anymore.
I'm tired of you hurting me.
Maybe you should get out of my life.
I wish I could slit your throat and call it even.
I'm tired of this pain.
I'm tired of this lie you keep putting me on.
Why would you do that?
To protect your own hide or mine?
I'm tired of your face.
It's ugly and disgusting to me now.
I'm tired of all of your crap.
I will throw you off the Brooklyn Bridge.
I will make you hit your face on a locker.
Or something harder to make you bleed.
This is for you little dweeb.
Now get out of my life because I'm tired of you. 

Author's Note

Dedicated to one person I trusted most. Then he had to rip my heart out of my chest. My favorite line of this is I wish I could slit your throat and call it even.

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

Wow, a really powerful write! Your emotions came through so strongly in this piece, and I really felt the anger and frustration behind your words. There was certainly a sense of pain and heartache in your poem, and I thought that you did a great job in expressing this in the beginning, particularly with the repetition of the line 'I'm tired,'. Great write!
~PaperHearts

[TheLastEclipse]

Very urban and that is all I have to say :)
89/100

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you.

[♥ Kinnixk]

Wow. You displayed your emotions perfectly and I felt the pain. Very good job! :)

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you :3

[♥ Kinnixk]

You're welcome :)

[Henrietta]

Lost my words when I read this, powerful words struck my head, true sadness and great poetry :)

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you.

[Henrietta]

Your welcome ^^

[Angie Diane♥♥]

:3 I hope you add writing soon :D so I can review back.

[Taylor Hurst]

I liked that line too. Very sad/anger driven poem. I like it. You have a knack for poetry.

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you :)

[That_Girl]

What a dick. You deserve better doll.

WOO!!!!!!!!! 50th comment! Hell yeah! :D

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Awe, why thank you. I hate him just as much as you do, but he did get better :P

[joshua deathdealer]

Nice. Great portrayal of emotions and anger.

[If theres a chance of l..]

Wow... This is amazing I really feel all your anger I think this is my new fav

[Jonathan De Elvira]

This was intense o.O...
i can feel the anger portray deeply from this..

[Alex]

Holy crap, strong poem. I don't wanna get on your bad side. ;)

[Shin]

I wonder who this person is XP, but it's a good one, you've written this from all your sadness and rage, I liked it.