Hold Me Tight

When I'm crying,
I want you to hold me tight.
Your arms are like a castle.
I hope when I'm sad,
You will hold me tight.
You keep me steady.
I would love for you to hold me tight.
This would make me happy.
Though I know you can't always be there.
When you can I hope you can hold me tight.
Then I'll know I have someone strong protecting me.

Author's Note

Reviews please.

Reviews

[Blue tailed kite]

I agree totally with Cattie, Smiley and Coyote poetry. Another great heartfelt poem. Enjoyed reading it :) :)

[A.Lee]

Everyone needs to be held tight by someone. It brings a measure of security and that special feeling of being loved enough that they want to protect you. Nice.

[smiley:)]

Yes, so true, I think every girl's dream is for someone to hold them tight, never let go, and always loving them, protecting them, etc.
Great write!
~Smiley :)

[Coyote Poetry]

We need to feel needed when we are weak and even when we are strong. I like this poem. You have talent for bringing the kind and sweet emotion of life forward. A excellent ending.
Coyote