My Temperature

My temperature rises,
Every time I see your face.
My temperature rises,
When ever I dream about you.
My temperature rises,
Because I love you.
It doesn't kill me when I think of you.
It doesn't make me feel down seeing you.
I love you and that is why my temperature rises.

Author's Note

Reviews.

Reviews

[smiley:)]

Short but great! It's really greatly written! Good job.

~Smiley :)

[Dillon Cotter]

Short, yet i really like this one. Its easy to understand and i like how you repeat "My temperature rises between the lines." Well done.

-Will

[JenLyn]

It's short and to the point yet it says so much. It's nice to read about the positive side of love because more often than not people only write about heartbreak and ache about not finding/having love but this is not one of those poems. It's different and a good write. Keep it up girly! :)

[Holly-Marie]

Really nice. It was different and a really nice piece.
It was heart warming and said everything that needed to be said in a few lines.
10/10 =) A great piece.

[Thomas Fleet]

I especially enjoyed this one!
Good job with this poem, really. :P
You're only getting better and better.
Thanks for sharing.

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

I like this. And i must say I like the way you write your poetry. It's different from what i usually read, and it's different from what i write it's unique. But i love when i feel this way about someone.

[Stammers]

I love how this focuses on a different side of loving someone, the fact that they make you feel good!!! you don't get much of that on this site,

tidy piece, really, nice stuff.