I'm Not

This is dedicated to four people.

I'm not garbage,
That you can pick up and throw away.
I'm not an animal,
That you can kick around when you're angry.
I'm not a doll,
I have feelings too.
I'm not an idiot,
I know what you are trying to do.
I'm not going to let you take advantage of me,
Like you always used to.
I'm not someone who hates you,
I just hate what you do.
I'm not a object,
I'm a person who can speak on my own.
I'm not a car,
That moves around a lot.
What I am is a human,
Just as well as you.

Author's Note

Reviews please.

Reviews

[Thomas Fleet]

You share real strong emotions with this poem. All of this is true and has happened to many, and unfortunately the one doing it either can't stop or doesn't care. It can hurt. My favorite lines are:
"I'm not someone who hates you,
I just hate what you do."

:)

[Abhinav]

ahhaa, excellent.. I feel that too, you know:)
i loved the emotions behind this one!

[PaperHearts]

Wow, this was a great write! I could feel the anger and intensity behind your words, making this a really powerful piece. You weren't afraid to say exactly how you felt, which I really liked. In the fourth line, 'your' should be 'you're'. :) Nice write,
~PaperHearts

[Dev]

What I am is a human,
Just as well as you.

Reflects a very nice emotion.
Well written !!
Good job !

[Bette]

well done i can feel the anger in this!

[Holly-Marie]

Full of emotion and very powerful.
Strong words. Great poem.

[Luna Northstar]

I love the emotion, the feeling, the flow, and the message. I get where your coming from, I think most people can, great job.

[Moth Phoenix]

Great poem =]
Anger most deff is in there and I see where you're coming from Great job!!!

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i can relate to this, as well... good write

[JenLyn]

I like everything but the last 4 lines they seem to throw off the flow, other than that it's a great write. :)