Until

Short poem. Been awhile!

Every moment we wait
Another wound opens
Causing everything to break
Until we are torn open

Author's Note

Just something that came to me. It's short...and to the point I guess. Not my best work...but I haven't been writing much and wanted too...so.

Reviews

[WEIGHWITHWORDS]

being torn open sometimes gives us an opportunity a recognizing what isn't working...it does require a different form of courage though. It's about you dealing with you. Not an easy task, but one that is well worth it. After all...it's only natural that after being torn...healing begins. You become realer.

[Jamie]

Short and powerful I really like this :) Great job!

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you so much :)

[Jamie]

You're welcome :)

[Angie Diane♥♥]

I only write poetry when I feel it. I am more into writing novels and short stories. This is just one of those poems that I needed to let out I guess.

[Jamie]

It's impressive :)

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you :)

[Jamie]

My pleasure :)

[ANTO]

its good Angie D - the use of metaphor and the flow - you'll be back to your poetic best in no time
anto :)

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you so much for the review! :)

[ANTO]

your welcome

[Heartful5160]

I love that. It really explains something that would have to do with love.

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you for the review.

[Heartful5160]

Your welcome!

[J Johnson III]

seize the moment? Good write. Sweet and short. I enjoyed reading it.

[Emunah June.]

This piece is so raw it almost feels unrefined, which is what makes it so charmingly captivating. There's something about the written word in its natural state that is absolutely beautiful. Your work never ceases to amaze me. Excellent pen!

[A. Amos]

I felt your work and enjoyed the read...well done!

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you! :)