Until

Short poem. Been awhile!

Every moment we wait
Another wound opens
Causing everything to break
Until we are torn open

Author's Note

Just something that came to me. It's short...and to the point I guess. Not my best work...but I haven't been writing much and wanted too...so.

Reviews

[WEIGHWITHWORDS]

being torn open sometimes gives us an opportunity a recognizing what isn't working...it does require a different form of courage though. It's about you dealing with you. Not an easy task, but one that is well worth it. After all...it's only natural that after being torn...healing begins. You become realer.

[Gerry Legister]

In short, a powerful poem

[AmjadPenboyoflight]

you write from spirit
very inspire

Allah bless

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

As they say united we stand divided we fall.
Short poems can be the most powerful, like this one.

[Nila M.]

Are our lives just a series of uphill battles against those feelings? I really like the short and to the point. Thank you!

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you for the review!

[Michael Mendez]

Sometimes less is more. I enjoyed it.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

So much emotion packed within a few lines I loved this Angie

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you, Sam! Means a lot!

[deleted]

Great point made in few words. Great job girl!

[Gee]

A failing love,staying to long.Sweet.

[Alicia Wilson]

As short as it may be, this is filled perfectly with emotion and passion, Great job!

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you!

[Alicia Wilson]

You're welcome

[Calamity]

Short but very concise and though provoking, a good quote. A reminder that time can heal but also loosen the seams more. Good work.

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you for the review!