Pull Me Away

Pull me away from the darkness,
That is clouding around my heart,
Pull me away from the pain,
That is being inflicted by you,
Pull me away from the room,
Which I've been imprisoned in,
Pull me away from it all,
To taunt me as I fall.

Author's Note

Haven't been writing as much. Haven't had a computer, but now I'm using my phone to write this poem.

Reviews

[Roger Turgeon]

It seems as though even in escape you expect to find...hurt.

[MoriartyMesa]

Not sure why, but I think this would make a nice background, the wording makes me think of it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qa7PJseO_hw

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you for the review.

[Antoñyo]

A poignant write, well-written and makes the reader (well, this one at least) wish there was more.

Thanks for the share

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you for the review. :)

[Antoñyo]

you're very welcome

[lovejulez03]

Random review here.. I liked this. Alot. As others said, it's short and to the point. Deep simplicity... those are often the best. Keep it up!

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you for the review :)

[lovejulez03]

No prob!

[Dominique Lambright]

I like it. Simple and to the point. :)

[MandaBear]

very interesting. =) I liked it

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the feel of struggle and the desire to be free from pain. The poem felt real and I like the directness of the language. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Emily Feret]

I like the idea of being pulled away from something bigger and bigger each time it is said. Beautiful. Strong.

[Jack Frost]

love it! short and deep- fantastic

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you :D

[Jack Frost]

anytime luv ^.~

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Same for you :)

[InsanityWriter]

Lovely. :)

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you!