Pull Me Away

Pull Me Away

A Poem by Angie Diane♥♥

Pull me away from the darkness,
That is clouding around my heart,
Pull me away from the pain,
That is being inflicted by you,
Pull me away from the room,
Which I've been imprisoned in,
Pull me away from it all,
To taunt me as I fall.

© 2013 Angie Diane♥♥


Author's Note

Angie Diane♥♥
Haven't been writing as much. Haven't had a computer, but now I'm using my phone to write this poem.

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It seems as though even in escape you expect to find...hurt.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Not sure why, but I think this would make a nice background, the wording makes me think of it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qa7PJseO_hw

Posted 11 Years Ago


Angie Diane♥♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the review.
A poignant write, well-written and makes the reader (well, this one at least) wish there was more.

Thanks for the share

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angie Diane♥♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. :)
Antoñyo

11 Years Ago

you're very welcome
Random review here.. I liked this. Alot. As others said, it's short and to the point. Deep simplicity... those are often the best. Keep it up!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angie Diane♥♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the review :)
lovejulez03

11 Years Ago

No prob!
I like it. Simple and to the point. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


very interesting. =) I liked it

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like the feel of struggle and the desire to be free from pain. The poem felt real and I like the directness of the language. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like the idea of being pulled away from something bigger and bigger each time it is said. Beautiful. Strong.

Posted 11 Years Ago


love it! short and deep- fantastic

Posted 11 Years Ago


Angie Diane♥♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you :D
Jack Frost

11 Years Ago

anytime luv ^.~
Angie Diane♥♥

11 Years Ago

Same for you :)
Lovely. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Angie Diane♥♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on March 27, 2013
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Hello, I'm Angie! I'm going to be 32 soon. Writing is something I love doing. I'm glad to be creating again. Also, I love anime, reading, and many other hobbies. Lately, I've been making YouTube v.. more..

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