You Asked For It !

What happens when someone asks for something and they truly do get it ?

Not to to go into vivid detail, recently I've had one member writing me rather consistently in Private Message, wanting me to critique his stories.

The stories - at least to me - are difficult to read at best. I mentioned the problems in them, grammar, spelling, just to name a few, there are other glaring errors, and I am not the only ones to mention this. And it does indeed make the story hard to read - or to at least figure out just what the heck is happening in it.

So this criticism is perhaps not just for the writer's benefit, but for others as well, so the story can be written in such a manner that not just myself but others can read it for content instead of criticism. It doesn't take that much writing skill to do so.

"Well, after my last (and hopfully) final request for clarity, he apparently had enough and said:

im tired of your bullshit and I give you reviews and always return favors you don't have the right to act all high and mighty with me it's f###### bullshit im done with your f###### stupid a*s.

So, I tell you out there. Beware.

If someone out there writes you personally for your review of their story. If you really tell them what the problem is in their writing and have time and time again already in the past, they may just fly off the handle. Let's hope in the future constructive criticism is not met with such an acerbic response.

On a different and friendlier channel, I would like to wish everyone Happy Holidays and a very Merry (upcoming) Christmas ! I will indeed be posting a new Dream Diary entry before the day is done.