Chancy hadda odd look in his eyes, much like the other boy’s now. Wolfing down the chocolates he stared straight into the looming darkness. I wished once AGAIN we were out of this woe-begotten town.
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This
Tale is Rated:
TEEN - best read beneath a full moon
I was with my Dad and we were out in some kind
of small town.
It was a
little creepy
with sparse
lighting and
it was
nighttime so
we stopped at
a bright
roadside
diner’s.
I was with my
little
brother,
Chancy, or
Chauncleroy as
his full name
was.
Dad left us
both in the
car to go
inside to get
directions so
we could go
home. We had
the windows
rolled up on
both sides and
the locks were
down so no-one
could get in.
As Dad was
gone, A
Caucasian boy,
similar in age
to Chancy came
up to the side
of the car.
It was odd, it
was like he
was dressed
for Halloween,
some kind of
wildman or
bear hunter’s
outfit,
perhaps
camouflage. It
was really
raggedy. I
looked to his
chin and saw
he had long
hairs coming
from it which
I thought was
odd for
someone
apparently as
small a
stature as he
had.
His
fingernails
were painted
black and he
was barefoot
with black on
his toenails
as well as if
he had been
walking a long
distance.
I chuckled at
the depth of
his costume,
amazed his Mom
would go so
far as to do
all of this
for him. The
boy himself
was a little
odd though,
and not just
in appearance.
He circled
around the
car, as if
searching for
something, I
wasn’t sure
what, and then
suddenly
smacked his
hands soundly
against the
pane of the
window where
Chancy was.
Chancy, rather
rudely, stuck
his nose
against the
glass in
return. The
boy in the
costume,
squeaked his
hands down the
glass in the
old rubber
gloves from
his hairy
bear’s outfit
and spoke
quietly,
almost as if
in a trance.
“Join
me.”
and then he
made a strange
sneezing
sound. He
definitely
didn’t look
well, like he
was sick or
something and
his voice was
really creepy,
like it held
no emotion or
he was a
dangerous
person.
I was already
spooked from
this nighttime
town so I
opened the
door on the
other side and
met the little
hooligan still
rubbing his
hands on the
other side of
the car.
“You need to
leave.” I said
in a voice
with more
confidence
than I felt.
He smiled at
me, and his
eyes looked
watery, like
he was crying
which was the
opposite of
his
expression,
which was a
kind of vacant
contentment.
Then he looked
hard at me up
and down, and
apparently not
liking what he
was seeing,
his expression
soured. “You’re not welcome here.“
I returned the
look. “Same to
you. Look,
we’re trying
to find the
main road. Do
you know where
that is. You
DO live around
here don’t you
?”
“Live
… ?” He
said as if
that was a
difficult
word. I had to
assume he was
a little
mentally
challenged
from his
behavior.
Finally I had
enough of this
more than
creepy
bear-boy and
said, “Shoo.
Go on, are you
trick-or-treating
or something ?
It isn’t
Halloween yet
ya know.”
“I’m Artis.”
the boy in the
costume said
and was
clearly not
impressed by
my display of
bravado to
him.
Then I felt
movement
beside me and
it was Chancy
who had gotten
out of the car
to join me to
see the
strange
confrontation.
“Get back in
the car,
Chancy.” I
hissed to him,
but he didn’t.
He did
something
really
strange.
Chancy jumped
ahead of me
and leaned his
head forward
quickly to the
strange boy,
and the
strange boy
frighteningly
did the same
thing.
For a moment
it looked like
they were
going to konk
their heads
together and
then an
optical
illusion, I
guess because
I was tired,
like their
heads meshed
together for a
moment, really
scary looking.
I knew it had
to be the
lighting. I
reached out to
pull Chancy
back but Artis
had a tight
grip on his
hand.
I reached out
to separate
their fingers
but as I did
so, it was
like they were
smoky snakes,
wriggling
around in
impossible
movements to
prevent me
from getting
them free.
Finally,
frustrated at
my
hallucination,
I slapped
Artis in the
face which
shocked him
for a minute.
Then I could
free his
fingers from
Chancy.
Looking at my
hand I could
see it was
smudged with
grime. Geez,
didn’t his
mother wash
his face or
anything ?
Chancy was
crying now and
I roughly
ushered him
back in the
car. “I’ll get
you some
candy, okay ?”
I promised.
“Just stay in
here, will ya
?”
Then I
realized I
couldn’t leave
him alone even
if the car
doors were
locked as
Artis would
coax him to
unlock them
again. So I
piled in the
car with him
and waited.
“Where’s my
candy ?”
Chancy asked
accusingly,
not forgetting
what I
promised
earlier.
* * *
“Oh.” I said,
and reached in
my pocket. I
hadda few
wrapped
chocolates in
there. “Here
ya go, sport.”
and gave them
to him.
Chancy hadda
strange look
in his eyes, a
kind of odd
wateriness,
much like the
strange boy’s
now. He wolfed
down the
chocolates and
then stared
straight ahead
of the car
into the
looming
darkness. I
wished once
AGAIN we were
out of this
woe-begotten
town.
Dad was taking
a very long
time asking
directions I
thought to
myself. Just
as I was
getting ready
to leave and
investigate,
he returned
back.
My ears popped
from the
pressure of
the door
slamming with
me in it as he
sat down and
crumpled a map
noisily under
his hand
looking at it
for a moment.
“Oh ! Hey, the
people here
are really
friendly, but
not very
knowledgeable.
They said we
should follow
this road and
it should turn
into the main
highway right HERE.” And
he pointed on
the map which
to me was just
a series of
colored
scribbles.
I looked ahead
and for a
moment I
thought I saw
Artis gripping
the side of
the car, but
when I blinked
and looked
again, I
didn’t. He was
gone. I looked
all around the
windows,
front, sides,
and back. He
wasn’t there.
Good riddance
to the little
cretin, I said
to myself.
Dad tried to
turn over the
car’s ignition
but it
couldn’t.
Something had
messed with
the engine. I
knew it was
impossible but
SOMEHOW I was
blaming Artis
for it.
“D****t.” Dad
said. “Hold on
a sec.” and
then he got
out of the
car. I was so
busy paying
attention to
him that I
didn’t see
Chancy trying
to sneak out
the side door.
“Chancy !” I
yelled in
frustration.
“What is it
now !?”
“Bathroom.” he
said quietly.
“Fine.” I
said, “But I’m
not leaving
you alone in
this place.
Here, give me
your hand.”
He did so and
it felt like
he was
sweating up a
storm. His
hand was hard
to hold onto
it was so
slippery, but
I finally
knotted and
tightened my
fingers around
his.
It seemed like
he was getting
a kind of red
rash on his
hands too. I
wondered if he
had handled
poison ivy
earlier. But I
was more
concerned with
him finishing
his business
and getting
back in the
car.
“Awright,
let’s go.” and
we started to
head towards
the
restaurant’s
open door, but
then he jerked
in the
opposite
direction
towards the
beckoning
darkness.
My grip was so
slippery that
if I pulled, I
would lose
him, so he
essentially
dragged me as
I howled after
him, “Where
are you going
NOW !?”
“Play
…” he
said
cryptically,
and his voice
sounded a
little funny.
And then I
looked down at
my grip. It
was like
ethereal
serpents were
wiggling there
way around my
fingers to
loosen our
grip.
I grabbed onto
his single
hand with both
hands and
somehow it
STILL slipped
out. Then I
grabbed his
shoulder and
it was like
his shirt
didn’t want to
stay on so it
was slippery
like wet
rubber.
Then he
snapped free
and was off
like a shot
around the
corner, some
kind of large
bush. I
bounded after
him. He was
only a few
feet ahead of
me. He made a
hard turn
around the
bush again.
I realized now
the bush was
brightly
colored, with
white and pink
blossoms.
Rather odd to
be out here as
it seemed to
be the middle
of the road. I
looked back
over my
shoulder but
couldn’t see
the car or
Dad.
We circled
around the
long bush a
few times and
then I heard
him start to
sing, “Ring a
Ring of
Rosies, Pocket
full of
Posies,
Acthishoo,
Acthishoo, we
all fall down
!“
That certainly
didn’t sound
like the
classic one I
learned in
school. What
the devil was
an Acthishoo ?
I started to
run faster
after him and
then saw Artis
ahead of him,
as if he was
leading him
on.
That got my
adrenalin
going ! I
didn’t want
Chancy to have
anything to do
with that
cursed boy !
Then they both
began to sing
the same song,
and somehow
both of them
knew the
lyrics. Chancy
was starting
to sneeze now.
I guess it was
that damned
bush which had
to have been
just loaded
with pollen as
pretty as it
was.
Then I somehow
started losing
speed and he
ducked around
the side of
the bush. As
soon as he
vanished and I
made the turn
to meet him,
both him and
Artis were
gone.
It was
impossible !
He had only
gotten a few
feet ahead of
me yet there
was no sign of
him. I had
enough of this
game !
“Chancy !!” I
yelled at the
top of my
lungs. “You
better get
back here or
you’re gonna
be in big
trouble,
mister !”
Then I heard
Dad yell in
pain back at
the car. It
sounded like
something
might’ve
fallen ! Was
it the hood of
the car and he
was checking
out the engine
now ?
I turned to
face the sound
and suddenly
it was like
the ground had
turned to a
black pudding.
Where it
touched me it
created
terrible red
painful boils.
It was so
slippery and I
fell into it.
i am not going to read it under moon, if any ghosts overpowers me :P
hahhahaha nice ending, the scare ooofffff all gone :)
best wishes
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I - may have gotten a little carried away when I wrote that. :) It's just another weird dream I had... read moreI - may have gotten a little carried away when I wrote that. :) It's just another weird dream I had. I've had several, but some are a little too strange from print. Some non-scary ones I'll post in November tho.
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yeah i too have weird dreams at times but they are rarely this horrid types like you have....
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I think when the brain gets too much or too little oxygen or blood it can tend to have wide and far .. read moreI think when the brain gets too much or too little oxygen or blood it can tend to have wide and far visions of both heaven and hell. I know when I was on Saphris my mind basically snapped and I thought all the mysteries of the universe could be found in a deck of shuffled playing cards.
I also developed some games, new games to play with the cards. At some point I suppose I should writ.. read moreI also developed some games, new games to play with the cards. At some point I suppose I should write them all out. :7
Sure thing, Cody. And coming from you that's quite the compliment as you are the accomplished horror.. read moreSure thing, Cody. And coming from you that's quite the compliment as you are the accomplished horror-story writer. Thank you !! :D
That's two votes for a black page so - I'll do that in the next chapter after this one. Glad you lik.. read moreThat's two votes for a black page so - I'll do that in the next chapter after this one. Glad you like the story. The next will be - a medical nightmare.
I did a little investigation afterwards, the "Acthishoo, we all fall down !" is from the Ring Around.. read moreI did a little investigation afterwards, the "Acthishoo, we all fall down !" is from the Ring Around The Rosies, which turns out is notta cute nursery rhyme after all but a child's memory about a terrible plague, the Black Death. I didn't know this till I looked it up later.
That's not the first time I've had nightmares on things I didn't know. Likely tho it's something I learned in school and just forgot over time - resurfaced by bad meds.
Awright, then I'll use that for the other stories. Orange ink okay ? I didn't know, maybe a little g.. read moreAwright, then I'll use that for the other stories. Orange ink okay ? I didn't know, maybe a little grayish or some stuff.
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The orange was nice. Soft on the eyes.
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OK, I'll keep orange text for the remainder of the chapters. Thanks !