Operation: Polly Rocket
A Story by dw817
This is the 35th chapter from the last draft of the 2nd novel of Barrier I am working on.
I'm presenting it here to give you an idea of the kind of writing I do and have been doing
for several years.
Secret Technology • Unrequited Love • Absolute Vengeance
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June 2013 Written by David Wicker
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Operation: Polly Rocket
This is the 35th chapter from the last draft of the 2nd novel of Barrier I am working on.
I'm presenting it here to give you an idea of the kind of writing I do and have been doing
for several years now, and to introduce you to Dev & Tyr who encompass all 4 novels.
Hopefully it will also encourage you to examine my novel when I get it finalized and completed as it represents a great deal of work and writing on my part.
I will have it published through Amazon Books as a Teen Reader.
"Sure
thing, sir. I'll bring Tyr back here." Stefani said politely to Arkos,
eager to see what horrible scheme that he had in mind for her. And he
wanted to see her cute little face screw up in a terrible scream of fear
at his "handsome" visage.
As Stefani walked to the playroom, Arkos watched intently and then
depressed a button from his tray console where a motor wheeled his chair
back into the chair behind his office table where there was a special
recession it fit into. There was a soft beep as it snapped into place
and a green light showed at the side of the arm rest that he was docked
perfectly.
He tapped another button and the chair and his wheelchair combined
turned around to face the screen again, showing only the tall black
velvet vector of the back of the chair again, his face hidden from view.
Stefani walked over to the playroom seeing Tyr sitting on her legs on
the floor, hugging one soft stuffed version of the Polly Rocket doll
under her arm and with her little fingers from both hands she was
holding the sides of other action figures, bobbing them left and right
to make them appear as if they were walking around on the floor.
Stefani heard her giving dialog to each of them, apparently playing out
one of the episodes from the show. Stefani watched half-interested for a
moment, but then remembered that Arkos was waiting for her to retrieve
Tyr back into the main office.
Tyr saw her approach and turned around and looked up with a big smile on
her face and blurted out excitedly, "Isn't it great ! I never had the
whole collection before !" she said and then took the small Polly Rocket
figure and had her "blast off" with a slobbery whooshing sound from her
mouth as she swooped it around in front of her face with a look of
absolute wonder.
Stefani coughed contemptuously. "Isn't that nice,
sweetie. But I think it's time to meet the Director. He has some - final
preparations - before we return you home."
Tyr looked puzzled and dropped the plastic figure of Polly Rocket as if
she was shot down by an unseen ray gun but continued to cling onto the
softer fabric version of her under her arm.
Tyr, who had often had her head in a cloud mostly from not feeling well
due to the special diet that Stefani put her own to this point, with a
rare moment of clarity, suddenly saw things around her the way they
were.
"But ma'am," she began meekly, "I thought you said I would never be able
ever to - " and then her mouth opened wide sideways showing the sides
of her perfect little white teeth as she started crying at the sad
memory of Stefani telling her earlier she would never be leaving Arkos
now.
If there is one thing Stefani despised working in this company was all
the rotten children in it wailing, crying, and bawling about every
little thing as if they needed to get their diaper changed every hour of the day.
She bit her lip angrily at the unpleasant wailing Tyr was now doing but
maintained an even voice in reply while retrieving a handkerchief for
her to blow her nose in.
"Well now, sweetie, things can change, didn't you know that ?" she said
leaning down so Tyr could soil her expensive Egyptian cotton and
imported Chinese silkworm handkerchief before tossing it disdainfully on
the floor in disgust. And then her voice took a harder edge. "Why don't
we go and find out what he wants ?" and then grabbed her arm.
Tyr pinched her elbow to her side to hold on to the soft stuffed version
of Polly Rocket, determined to take it with her for comfort. Stefani
looked at her for a moment and then tried to tug it out of her arms but
Tyr fought her and whined plaintively and selfishly that she wanted to
keep it, even though it was clearly not her own personal property.
Stefani yanked on it again with her free hand, grunting, still holding
onto Tyr's hand with the other but she couldn't get enough leverage to
pull it out of Tyr's tight little grip under her armpit.
She didn't want her to have it because it was possible that Arkos might
hold her responsible for its absence from his diversionary playroom for
his younger guests, but she also didn't want to keep him waiting.
"No !" Tyr said in a loud and purely selfish voice and gave a fierce
look up to Stefani that she would clearly fight to keep possession of
the beloved and desired doll.
"Fine," Stefani said in frustration, "Keep it, whatever. Let's go." and
then dragged her back to the chair as Tyr hummed cheerfully, determined
she was going to keep the doll as a parting souvenir when returning to
the surface.
But when the pair returned back to the darkness and Arkos massive dark
desk, he had his chair turned around again where you couldn't see him
just as when Stefani first entered.
Stefani stood with Tyr directly in front of the desk. She knew he was
behind the chair, out of sight, but wondered why he wasn't going to
present himself to Tyr as he promised earlier.
She looked around a moment and finally said politely. "Sir, Mr. Arkos ?"
but there was no reply. There a long moment of silence. Suddenly
Stefani heard a soft sound and looked down in reproach to see Tyr had
put her favorite finger in her mouth for comfort and was sucking on it
comfortably, scared not only of the darkness but the absence of the
expected host.
Before the day was done, Stefani was going to break her of that disgraceful habit, she promised herself that.
But it was clear why Tyr was concerned. She was expecting something bad
to happen, and Stefani was beginning to feel the same way at the moment
with the Director deliberately ignoring both of them.
"Sir, you said to -" Stefani said with a bit of fear in her voice, and
stepped towards the desk but suddenly the 20-foot tall screen lit in
bright pink and neon colors and Tyr's favorite TV show logo appeared on
it:
"The Adventures Of Polly Rocket !"
. . .
and the matching theme music, all of 5 silly notes from a chord blared out of the speakers holding longer on the last note.
Stefani just about lost 2 fingers of her own in the brief struggle as
Tyr pulled free of her suddenly with an incredible surge of energy and
then ran around her to stand in awe of the massive lit up screen, her
mouth as wide open as humanly possible.
"Waaow ..." she said quietly with great respect and reverence for the cartoon icon, saliva easily dripping down her mouth as she stared and drooled at the almighty image.
Then she shifted the doll of the same image from under her armpit to her
chest and hugged it tightly with both arms. Then she sat quietly down
on the floor Indian-style to watch to see what would happen next.
The narrator for the program, sounded suspiciously
like a game-show host and he spoke to the young viewers as if it were a
matter of world importance. "Follow the star-crossed adventures of
Polly Rocket with the help of her star-studded musical band, the
Rockettes, as she tackles the evil minions who threaten to unbalance the
peace of the galaxy !"
The narrator then went on to introduce each of the characters in the
show, Polly Rocket of course, and there was a zoom shot of each of her
companions, each looking sillier than the last.
It was if the finest military leader of our Homeland Security had smoked
both crack cocaine and pure cane sugar in the same plastic dime bag and
then proceeded to brainlessly pick out this hapless crew of pre-teen
girls to be the unlikely defenders of our universe.
Stefani walked slowly over to the screen where Tyr was sitting on the
floor realizing Arkos had something else in mind instead of a direct
introduction to the small girl and her eyes glazed over in disgust and
actually felt her cerebral cortex tightening around her brain in an
effort to stop the barrage of utter and moronic stupidity it was being
subjected to at the moment.
Her eyes physically hurt from the bright and painful pastel colors of
the show as if it were a kind of carefully designed visual mental
torture thought up by sadistic CIA specialists to inflict their victims
with to get them to talk.
She winced at the above-board poppy display of it all.
"Nice." she finally said sarcastically, feeling her voice returning. Tyr
turned around crossly, angrily, that anyone would DARE to make fun of
the incredible Polly Rocket and yelled, "Shhh !" to her before whipping
her head back to the show, her just washed pretty red hair flipping
around her face. She didn't want to miss a vital second of it.
The narrator continued with the same hyper-dramatic tension in his
voice, "This week's episode - The Great Gift." it said in the title
space and the theme music changed to a cadence that implied an
incredible story was about to unfold.
But as the title started to fade there was brief message appeared that
appeared boldly on the screen, almost impossible to see unless you froze
frame and it read it.
It said, "Sex before marriage is against the law and will throw you in jail."
It was an obvious attempt to interject subliminal messages during the
show from the psychotic producers to reach little girls, which, as it
turned out were all married women with children, and few people realized
it because it appeared so quickly.
Stefani did notice it however as she was very sharp on details all her
life and smiled softly to herself wondering just how many of these would
appear during the show.
She was also curious to see what would happen if she brought this little
illegal detail up to the broadcasting company that sponsored the show
as subliminal advertising, to her knowledge, was still strictly illegal,
and to do it to children was just immoral !
She smiled to herself tapping the bottom part of her lip with her index
finger thoughtfully and wondered if they could start to do that here in
Arkos for better child control.
(As I wrote this chapter, during each new scene of this
broadcast episode, a new subliminal message is revealed to the viewers
every 4-minutes of the show, but I will not list them all until the end
of this NEXT written chapter as they would clearly distract from the continuity of the story I wrote here. So until then, back we go !)
Stefani started patting the hem of her skirt frustratedly but realized
there must be a reason for all this seemingly unplaced madness right
now.
In the show, the best scientists on ou planet were
apparently mistaken about the universe being black with standard
quasars and stars as outer-space was instead bright pink like a
delicious trail of strawberry milk sweetened with savory and smooth
5-pointed gumdrop stars with soft edges.
These candy stars bobbed peacefully with a life of their own floating in
the sea of pink and were clustered with tantalizing crystallized sugar
on their galactic surfaces that sparkled like million-dollar diamonds.
And then it showed Polly Rocket streaking in the sky in her rather phallic and purple and pink rocket.
The top portion if it was a translucent yellow and was perfectly and
roundly shaped like a giant rubber baby's n****e from a baby bottle and
it actually made cartoon wiggling sounds as it jiggled from unseen space turbulence.
Stefani continued to watch the video, and felt her breakfast lurch in
her stomach watching the n****e's movements as the cameraman seemed
absolutely fascinated by it and zoomed in on and focused way too much
time on the suggestive oral piece. She gagged and coughed in the back of
her throat, amazed the show made it past it's first pilot appearance.
The rocket also made silly noises as it streaked through the pink goo of
space which sounded more like a washing-machine bubbling over its load
with sticky soap bubbles popping and blorping into the air instead of
something even remotely space-worthy when suddenly there was a polite
chiming sound as if a doorman were delivering a present for a birthday
party.
The screen cut to show Polly Rocket herself in her galactic standard
regulation beanbag chair filled likely with sweet jellybeans, the
artists apparently spending in inordinate amount of time to make her appear all grown-up and then somehow still diminutive so children everywhere could still relate to her heroic image.
. . .
She stood up suddenly to face a control panel that for all sakes of
appearances looked more like a box of sweet round multi-flavored
disc-shaped candies on a pink pedestal for a good little girl rather
than an even conceivably possible operational computer console.
To her right there was a silvery looking robotic parrot placed directly
as the results of a badly celled CGI insert on a perch that swung to the
movements of the ship's momentum as if Newton's theory of gravity still
applied in zero-G space.
Then Polly spoke in surprise in a voice that was obviously meant to
empower strong female virtues in young impressionable girls everywhere,
"Wow Crackers ! Did you hear that ? I think we've got an incoming
transmission from the Fallopian Galaxy ahead !"
Polly then reached over the candy board and twirled a knob that looked
more like a round peppermint with red stripes with one of her white
gloved hands and and you could see the tip of her tongue sticking out
the top of her mouth as if she was calibrating it with great delicacy.
As she did so the camera started panning in on her delicate fingers forcing the audience to see the importance of her movements.
Out of synchronization with the show, the theme music then suddenly
thumped loudly like a staggering heartbeat and took a uniquely serious
edge as if the entire universe itself were in a time bomb and would
rapidly be vaporized in mere seconds if dear Polly couldn't get the
frequency right on this random and unexpected communication.
From the speakers in the ship you could hear an extended canned warbling
AM radio effect ripped from a sound stock library as a garbled voice
finally echoed into focus, unfortunately for the eager viewers, it was
unintelligible.
Polly's face was seriously intent and sweat beaded on her forehead under
her adorable heart-shaped hair barette like it was a matter of life or
death if she couldn't rotate her peppermint drop to the right location.
Tyr watched with breathless anticipation and was unaware she was
stroking the doll in her arms hard with one hand as if it might help
soothe Polly to concentrate on getting the right frequency from her box
of candies.
Then the voice was very clear, it was Arkos, the Director ! This
suddenly startled Stefani as she was felt herself careening in one
direction, about to lose her balance standing and fall over, her brain
numbing up from the sheer stupidity and death-by-pinkness of the show.
It was definitely and unmistakeably his voice and it sounded bored and disgusted, "Stefani, I need to see you outside please."
The camera returned to show Polly's perfect little pristine face and she
jerked her head up suddenly and then gave a puzzled expression to face
the screen. "Holy Space Sneakers, Crackers !" she said, using her
tell-tale exclamation of surprise that she used for every episode.
She continued in the same serious tone, "That message certainly wasn't
for us. Does anyone know what it means ?" and she looked to her robotic
parrot as if it might glean more intelligence than she had on the
matter.
The parrot whistled in a silly trill and then spoke in a weird
voice-over whose pitch hinted at a man who was subjected to a
particularly torturous and painful castration before they would hire him
for a part in the show.
"No Miss Polly." came the strained and androgynous sounding voice of the metallic bird.
Polly tilted her head and there was a moment of silence in the show
where all you could hear was the consistent sound of her powerful rocket
engines bubbling in the background like a microphone placed over a
bathtub full of suds.
It sounded like the foam and suds were actually
exploding around the edges of the bath from some wayward and naughty
child who insisted on using an entire box of bubble-bath for it out of
pure meanness to see if he could somehow blow up his parent's house with
the unique effort.
Then Polly jammed her heroic face directly in front of the screen and
spoke beyond her youthful estrogen and sweet strawberry-milk soaked
universe to reach a uniquely new one, audience participation ! "Hey, do
YOU know what that message might mean ?"
And like all shows of this nature, the volume in it got quiet for a
moment giving the audience no less than 10 lingering seconds to call
back their own intelligent suggestion on the matter. As the seconds
ticked by, you could hear a stopwatch in the distance clicking off each
second.
To assist the viewers, a new music played to put them into thinking
mode, if that was even remotely possible as the only viewers outside of
eager young children who could possibly have tolerated the video cavity
to this point would clearly be vegetable in design, and that would be
eggplants and turnips.
The camera focused on Polly as her pretty face screwed up in serious
concern and she suddenly cocked her head hard left and right as if she
were actually listening to and thinking and considering the verbal
suggestions that were being tossed audibly at her by the concerned good
little boys and girls watching this episode everywhere.
After the 10-seconds had elapsed there was a happy ding like a fresh
apple pie had just finished baking in an oven from old B&W sitcom
and she reached up her white-gloved hand and snapped her fingers in
finality. "That's a good idea to be sure." she said directly into the
reflection of the camera recording her. "But hey, Crackers ! I'll bet
you what ! It's a secret code !"
The parrot, Crackers, bobbled a bit on his perch as his stiff metallic
bird legs and walked from one side to the next as if it didn't know how
to find the center of it.
Finally it whistled in a more serious trill and fluffed it's steel fan
of wings behind it and you heard the strangely effeminate male voice
speak a half a second off queue to it's robotic beak, "Gosh Polly, you
could be right ! Let's contact our main headquarters back at planet
Voova to see what they have to say !"
"Holy Space Sneakers !" Tyr whispered breathlessly, her eyes unblinking
and wide, completely fascinated by the show's toilet-paper thin plot,
and the expression on her apt face was mirrored only by Polly's own
serious determination to find the source of this elusive and secret
message.
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© 2013 dw817
Author's Note
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Questions, comments, compliments, or kerosene, take your pick and lemme know what ya think ! :)
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Awesome!! I had a great time read it! Is there going to be more?
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Well the first novel is gonna get published through Amazon so I can't post any of that here. Barrier.. read moreWell the first novel is gonna get published through Amazon so I can't post any of that here. Barrier (above) is from a series I'm working on. 2 books are completed, the 3rd book needs only a few more chapters and then I can start on the 4th.
I was going to start posting one of my other completed novels, "The Nancy Principle" in (WC) once I start to slow down in here. It's massive, over 30-chapters, a little over 600 pages by itself.
I may post another odd chapter from the 2nd novel (Barrier) in time, "Yin & Yang" where Dev, currently located deep underground at the secret institute of Arkos which does experiments on the gifted, gets a brutal and humiliating lesson in Karate self-defense by two teenage girls employed by Stefani and the organization. }:)
I'm still working on data files and now I need to write a program to convert over Xanga's malformed offline HTML archives to a proper linked format. This will clearly help everyone in Xanga - so there is a bit of pressure for me to do that. :)
I'm also finding out that COURSES in WC can only be viewed by friends - no option for configuration to show them publicly. This is not at all what I wanted, I want all my works to be public, so there's a good chance during this week or by next Tuesday I'll shift those two lessons back to a standard writing so everyone can have access to them again.
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11 Years Ago
Seems like you have a lot of work to do! How long did it take you to write the 30 chapter book? Must.. read moreSeems like you have a lot of work to do! How long did it take you to write the 30 chapter book? Must have been a long time!! Well either way you post your lessons I am sure to read them and learn something!
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11 Years Ago
Actually Nancy Principle didn't take very long. The Dr said I had what was called post-traumatic str.. read moreActually Nancy Principle didn't take very long. The Dr said I had what was called post-traumatic stress disorder and I had blocked out my time working for the government. A friend of mine mentioned, "friends with my manager." and those 4-words triggered 3-months of memories I had long suppressed.
In that same evening from 6pm till 3pm the next day I wrote, for 21-hours - automatically - my entire time working there, 15 pages of text non-capitalized or punctuated or anything - and it was novel-worthy, non-fiction.
After the 15th chapter where I write about myself being in the mental ward which is WHY I didn't remember working there before, then I made the remaining chapters fictional and science-fiction where I wind up marrying my manager - Nancy, which was not her real name despite having a name-tag to that effect - well, you'd have to read the story to figure that one out. As for the science-fiction aspect, that involves Susan. :)
As for the lessons, yes, I don't want people to have to be friends to view it.
I was experimenting a bit more in Wordpress and can I say, as for listing community members, especially new people, they are seriously lacking. I would never have met someone as interesting as YOU out of the blue. *Gentle Smile*
WP is great if you already have a host of friends but if you don't, you can easily get lost and totally forgotten in there ...
In WC I know essentially no-one, but I can be found here by strangers and newfound friends - by my writing - and I like that, and I will do all I can to entertain and inform additionally. :)
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Added on June 7, 2013
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Tags: davidw, barrier, dev, tyr, lilly, time machine, time travel, stefani, arkos institute, telekinesis, high school, polly rocket, captain circumference, kidnapping, future technology
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