the sweet taste of your hell

horror, poem

Picture: 'Morbid' by Oskaline

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fluently entering your mind

sneaking sips of your fear

your death would be too kind

I think I will keep you near

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I love it, how your voice

reach that inhuman height

the tender meat is my choice

I linger on each little bite

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licking the constant stream

warm blood with iron taste

our duet, my bite, your scream

together perfectly paced

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I love it,  how you moan

the terror in your eyes

tearing your flesh from bone

lying between your thighs

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hot damp air escapes

while I'm eating your skin

creating such cute shapes

so delicate and thin

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I need to pause a while

can't have you passing out

it makes it all worthwhile

feasting as you shout

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gorging on your chest

I noticed with dismay

while chewing on your breast

you finally passed away

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licking off my fingers

I sit and rest a spell

your taste on me still lingers

the sweet taste of your hell

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Author's Note

Please be so kind as to leave some kind of comment, it would be appreciated by me!

Written October 23rd, 2006

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

I love it, how you moan
the terror in your eyes
tearing your flesh from bone
lying between your thighs

Necrophilia sprang to mind at this point but find later on she doesn't pass away till the breasts are chewed lol. This is a deeply disturbingly dark piece I LOVED IT lol. You rivet the reader to the spot like a ghoul trying to look away but can't afraid of missing the end. Keep em' coming

[Sukriti Suki]

Dark....I like this. The space between each stanza was a bit too much for me and took the impact away from the poem, or else it would have been darker. Otherwise this is very good.

[LeaflessTree]

Love it! :D

[Sarah E. Pearson]

pretty good, creepy, horrific definately, but good.