the mirror

fight between herself and evil

As I look in the mirror, 
watching as the darkness surrounds me.
I began to plead,
because at first,
when I joined him,
I didn't want to go were I am today.
but now,
two years later,
love the darkness,
as I stand in front of the mirror,
I watch what as the wings of darkness surround me
as I scream from the pain it gives me,
I wish for it to stop,
Knowing it wont.
For months I have wanted to die
For the pain to stop,
But it won't.
There's no end to the pain,
I look for my knife,
The one thing that might set me free,
and I look once more in the mirror,
at the monster I have become,
and drive the knife thou my heart.
still looking in the mirror,
I watch as I die.
the pain I feel is all numbed in the end,
as the darkness swallows  my soul,
because I belong in hell,
The only place I have ever belong

Author's Note

some of the grammer is bad, but tell me what you think

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

I look once more in the mirror,
at the monster I have become,
and drive the knife thou my heart.
still looking in the mirror,
I watch as I die.

awesome flow of dramatic theme. love it dear :)
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[Dusk Lavanna]

Thank you!

[David Burke]

that's very deep kido you should be proud of yourself